I'm working on a grant proposal. Of course there was hardly any time between when I found out about the grant and when it is due. I finished a draft late Thursday and sent it off for comments.
The comments I got back from someone who I trust to know these things included "yikes," "dreadful" and "horribly awry." I have some serious re-writing to do...
Update 3/13/12: 5 drafts later, it's much better and on it's way. Fingers crossed!
3 comments:
Aw, crap.
Happens to us all, though.
Next version is going to ROCK.
The submitted version was, I think, pretty good! Working on another, first draft review: "Not bad" with a side of "sloppy" (typos... ooops). At least I'm trainable :)
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